Original
“He has opposed the teaching of African American studies curriculum as well as the use of some authors and source materials that historians and teachers say makes it all but impossible for students to understand the broader historic and political context behind slavery and its aftermath in the years since."
My corrected version
“He has opposed the teaching of [controversial, questionable and unrelated parts of] African American studies curriculum as well as the use of some authors and source materials that [a limited number of activist] historians and teachers say makes it all but impossible for students to understand the broader historic and political context behind slavery and its aftermath in the years since."
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